*~Drama's Writings~*

[Drama_Queen]

Here's my poems, read and comment please?

*~Fallen~*

The buildings crumble,
The people fall
Doesn't that say anything to you at all?
The empire is gone,
The power broke
All because that one man spoke
The faith has vanished,
The crops have failed
If only you could now prevail
The sun it shines on the hot red sand
And you have now taken into hand
The task before you, set in stone
Will help you save your fallen home



*~Fire Bright~*

The flickering flames  
Are fire bright  
They shine for ever  
Through the night  
 
Dancing Faeries  
Round and round  
Throwing petals  
On the ground  
 
Pink and blue  
Yellow and red  
The swirling colours  
Invade my head  
 
A soft voice sings  
Sharp and clear  
'Where have you gone?  
Where have you gone my dear..?'  
 
The music stops  
The dancing halts  
 
But still the flames  
Are fire bright  
They shine for ever  
Through the night  
 
The soft voice grows louder still  
'Have you left?  
Just passed me by?  
Here you leave me to cry and cry..'  
 
The voice, I know  
Belongs to me  
And I cling on to my misery  
Blinded, so I cannot see  
 
And still they climb  
Into the night  
Those flames, so red  
They burn fire bright  
 
I turn away  
The dark, it follows  
The squirrels,  
Quiver in their hollows  
 
Good bye I say aloud  
Parting in the sky are  
The darkening clouds  
 
The moon bathes me  
In silver light  
As I say good bye  
To my life  
 
And for ever still  
They're fire bright  
Those flickering flames  
Consume the night  


*~Untitled~*

She sang a song
In falling rain
While in her eyes
Were tears of pain
Streaming down
Across her cheek
She turned away
Not to speak
Banished far
To distant land
No one lends
A helping hand
Her face is gone
In families mind
She has lost the track
Of space and time
Here in this house
She lives alone
Afraid to call her place
A home


*~Untitled~*

Shattered dreams
Upon the floor
Gone forever
I'll see no more

Broken hopes
Laid in disdain
Lost in time
Theres no more pain

Torn heart
Inside of me
Sunken further
In bottomless sea


*~Untitled~*

The days are long
Gray and cold
The wind blows on
And I am told
This place is empty
Alone and bitter
Its halls are filled
With little critters
The ghosts, they haunt
This desolate place
Moving slowly
Through time and space
The screams at night
Are high and long
The birds near here
Have lost their song
And so I'm told
It's empty here
But I hold this place
So close my dear...

Thats all for now. Comment please? thanks

[bright_angel]

[glow=red,2,300]Those are great sophia!! your good at poetry! i could'nt do better  [/glow]

[Drama_Queen]

thanks sally! ;D

[Drama_Queen]

*~You and I~*  

You take a gun
I pick a flower
You leave home
I stay here
You write letters
I reply
You die at the front
I am sad
You were only a young lad
I die old and you die young
For me and you there is no sun
Peace has come, and peace has gone
When will peace sing its song?


*~Date of Birth and Maiden Name~*

Pain is like a game to me
That, you may never see
Though the blood trickles
Like a stream
It doesn't hurt, I never scream

I'm running through the black you made
I see you digging with a spade
The gravestone reads your mothers face
Date of birth and maiden name

You fear the pain
You think I'm insane
I'm watching you from a distance
Waiting for, your acceptance

I'm running through the black you made
I see you digging with a spade
The gravestone reads your mothers face
Date of birth and maiden name


*~Burning me~*  
 
My fingers are bleeding  
And You're burning me  
I'm forever lost in the ocean sea  
Fighting a losing battle  
I sometimes hear the door knob rattle  
Locked inside, I can't get out  
My voice, not strong enough to shout  
I remember when I used to sing  
And dance and play, I was a merry thing  
I wonder where that life went to  
And then my mind drifts back to you  
My fingers are bleeding  
And you're burning me  
I'm forever lost in the ocean sea  


*~Something~*  
 
Somethings missing  
But I don't know what  
Somethings gone  
But I forgot  
Somethings here  
But I can't see  
Something clouds my memory  
 
*~Untitled~*  
 
Silver light casting  
Upon the stoney ground  
Water flowing freely  
From the broken well  
Vines are a-creeping  
Up the hard brick wall  
Fair maiden satnds on window sill  
Ready to make the fall


*~Untitled~*

The moon it shines
On her pale white face
And a part of her
Cries in disgrace
The rest of her
Wants to hide away
Never again wanting  
To see the day
The sun it burns,
Her eyes are weak
She has long forgotten
The way to speak
And here she stands
Alone and abused
What are you now,
Going to do?

what do you think?

[blue_angel]

that's really good soph I love ur poems  ;D

[Drama_Queen]

thanks mon.

Untitled
~~~~~~

My face is tear streaked
The rain pours down
The street is silent
Only the sound
Of drums in my ears
Louder and loud
They torture my soul
Dragging me along
This bottomless hole
There is no light
That shined as bright
As that time ago
When you held me so


Untitled
~~~~~~

If it's love at first sight, how come love is blind?
If he's not your type, why is he so kind?
If he's not your hero, why didn't he let you fall?
And don't tell me he's not your soul mate,  
Don't try to tell me that at all...

Untitled
~~~~~

An old man walks
The hard worn path
His life has been
Long and hard
He's walked alone
Too long now
The years have passed
Has he noticed somehow?
The autum leaves
Crunch under his feet
And a nearby lamb
Gives it's first bleet
And still the man walks
Not a halt or a sigh
Just an old man walking
With his life passing by


Untitled
~~~~~

Careless movements
Against the wind
Walking slowly
The sky is dim
The sun is hiding
Behind the clouds
And the neighborhood children
They scream so loud
With my scarf wrapped tight
I'm ready to take on
What comes in the night
The sky is faded
The sun is gone
I no longer feel like singing this song
Can I change the tune?
The words and ways?
Or will I be singing this for days and days?
The slow and lonely words
Drift around in my head
Playing to the beat
Thats drumming by my ears
The sun is sleeping now
And the stars have come to play
And the night hangs like silk
Lightly touching my head
And the children have stopped screaming
I'm standing here alone
I turn to walk up the driveway
I've finally found my home

Untitled
~~~~~

She's got devil eyes
That little girl
She's got devil eyes
To rule the world
She's got devil eyes
To stun us both
She's got devil eyes
Ain't that enough?


Questions
~~~~~~

I sometimes wonder  
Where I am
Why I'm here
And how to get out
I sometimes ponder
Who I am
Whats my name
And how do I find out
I sometimes think
Whats it worth
Why should I
And how come I have to
I sometimes wish
There was an answer
There was a reason
And there is a way to find out

Untitled
~~~~~

I sit and drink the coffee
Hot, despite it's bitterness
Burning my tongue
And un-nerving my taste buds
But sweet and satisfactory
Knowing I'll be awake when you get home

Untitled
~~~~~

 The void of darkness
grows larger
as i realise, my demise
   and how fickle my imagination
has become.
when i take a few steps forward
   i am lost further
into the deep
 and if my mind awakens
  what will be there to see?
and how will i know what's real?
   broken shards of glass
remind me.
 cutting my skin
and leaving a mark of red
drops,  
  upon the ground.
staining the past
and the future
that is to come.

[blue_angel]

I luv the 4th one ur pomes always capture me soph ;D

[squall]

;DYoo're really good at poetry Soph! Keep it up! Check out my poems sometime, k? =)SQUALL! WOO! heehee just let me entertain myself! o-0

[Drama_Queen]

thanks squall

[Drama_Queen]

it's like he's empty
a statue with glass eyes
he doesn't seem to register
what stands in front of him
or remember who he loves
his family cares for him
but realise he's not going to wake up
out of this daydream he's been living
coming up ten years now
the doctors say he's improved
from the motionless man he was
but just because he nods his head
and maybe smiles
doesn't mean he knows what he's doing
he's being put on show
for people he doesn't know
and they gasp or cry
but does he really know why?
i can't love him now
this empty statue
a body with no mind
lost in a endless void of time.